Motivation (NRPNBP)

Motivation is the reason or reasons one has, for acting or behaving in a particular way. Mrs.Pratas has an interesting topic in which she wrote many wonderful and thoughtful opinions on why the motivations of children is the difference between a amazing and bright future and a dark future. Without doubt, there are many other things that affect being a successful and an extra ordinary individual, such as ideas, pushing to the limit, thinking outside of the box, persistence, focusing, building on your mistakes and much more but motivation is up there too.

Motivation is known as a strong force which helps people to achieve what they want and aspire to, which can help overcome all possible obstacles. If poperly supported with strength of mind and courage of the spirit, motivation can become an unbeatable weapon in the hands of anyone on the way to achieve allsorts of succes and lead to a much beter life. The essay was excellently written and the I personally agreed with many of the aspects in which she looked at motivation. She stated many interesting and true facts about learning and motivation such as learning is not an easy path. Infact its a rough and foggy bridge. A bridge where one wrong step can lead you to the ocean of darkness beneath it. But only people with the characteristics of an extraordinary person and motivation can lead you to your destiny waiting for you, the end of the bridge, a amazing and rich life. These people are the ones who strike through the fog and fight their way through to the other side. She also wrote that teachers only open the door for you, the students have to walk in. Not only is the locked door is not easy to open, but hard to walk in it as well. It’s like a door a thousand miles away. Where there are no short cuts. Students have to have great determination, talent and motivation. But as Lao Tzu once said “The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step,” and every step takes you closer.

I greatly enjoyed the whole essay, but there were a few dents in it that can be fixed with a little effort. There are some pictures that mislead/confuse the reader about what you are trying to say. For example, if you talk about persistency and put a picture of a bear, it will be a bit confusing. Over all, keep publishing great topics like these.

Ali.