Wednesday, October 17, 2012


SPACE
     JUMP
        RESPONSE

So one day a guy decides hey you know what I want to free-fall from space. Okay WHY! I know it’s a great view and all but seriously. When miss Lees first told us about this video I was like ha-ha yeah right. But Felix actually free-fell 38 miles up in space (128,000 feet.) when miss Lees showed us the video my first thought was this dudes crazy. I'm sure he had fun falling at 1,342 km per hour. Well that’s way faster than my car. And all to break a world record and he broke the sound barrier. It’s amazing what some people come up with to do when they are bored. Well I will say one nice thing about this dude he sure is brave. But he did hesitate when he was about to jump. But who wouldn't I sure would if I was crazy enough to do such a dangerously stupid thing. I mean your falling from space and your like you know what I could explode any second right now. But who cares this is fun. That what I’d be thinking. What if out of nowhere a stupid bird came out of nowhere and he just crashed into it. Would his space suit have ripped and would he have burst. What would have happened to that poor innocent bird.  So many things could have gone wrong but I am going to go ahead and say this RED-BULL GIVES YOU WINGS! Yes thank you red-bull for sponsoring such a dangerous action proving that red-bull does in fact give you wings. Okay so if I had a space capsule a crew that was very persistent I jump from space would I do it… SURE! I am just kidding no I wouldn't but Felix did and he should be proud That he did it and broke a world record. So good on him. Well what else do I have to say good job Felix you sure are brave and little crazy. But brave and I don’t know where he came up with the idea of jumping off of places. But oh well he sure likes so good job Felix you should give yourself a pat on the back for this. Good job Felix I am sure looking forward to seeing your other crazy stunts.

1 comment:

  1. Sapeeda, I can really sense your voice / tone in this first post. You have a flair for the dramatic and I sense you really enjoy story telling with your dialogue and vivid descriptions bouncing between the action and your response to it. Some tips and reminders for your next post: we will be using the blogs to help with our writing skills, including working on a more formal tone which includes proper paragraphing/sentences. The style of this post is more a stream of consciousness (free running thoughts basically). It is possible to maintain some of the great things bout your enthusiastic expression and be structurally strong. I look forward to more colorful and expressive posts!

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